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1. What is the primary idea of the content in the articles?


These two articles are written about the GPS function.
First of all, the function and the car navigation system of GPS were explained in the
first article.
It was the second article that many were especially explained that about the GPS
function.
GPS provides the function of calculating the destination and discovering a new road
from the map.
This is one of important information in the article that GPS detects the place by using
the satellite.


2. Do you think the individual sections and headings in the document (articles) clearly
represent the idea that was communicated. Explain the reasons behind your
comments.


I think the individual sections and headings in the document (articles) clearly
represent the idea that was communicated.
Because a detailed explanation of the function of GPS and the usage of the car
navigation system is written, and there was a part linked with finding.
Very clearly because of comprehensible details after that and explaining by finding the
article.
Because these two articles have written not only the explanation but also the
procedure, it is easy for the person who reads.



3. What details are included in the articles?

First of all, the first article explains the operational procedure of the car navigation
system. It starts from applying the engine of the car, and the method of looking for the
route to the destination is written.And, the car navigation system is guided in the map
of the voice and the display.
The explanation of the function of GPS is written in the second article, and GPS is a
meaning named global positing system. GPS keeps the relation to the car navigation
system by discovering the destination, and sending the signal of the place from the
satellite.
4. Was there anything that was confusing? If so, what is it?


It is not an article that causes confusion. However, it might be very kind to add the
explanation for the person who doesn't know the satellite.


5. What is good about the writing? Why is it good?


The first article may be very legible. It can be actually easily operated by explaining
the procedure.As for the second article, it is divided by heading, and the explanation of
GPS should be written in detail.And, because details of the GPS function are
explained as for the article, it is a good point.These articles do a comprehensible
explanation to the person who doesn't know the car navigation system and
GPS.Because the plan to the destination in addition to the basis of the car navigation
system and the explanation of the GPS satellite is supported, it is good.


6. Are there any errors that need to be corrected?


As for these articles, the place in which it was already correct, and mended was not
found.However, you may add that the GPS function is used for not only the car
navigation system but also other functions.The understanding of the GPS function will
rise if it does so.Moreover, because the content thickens by adding the explanation of
the satellite, it might be good.



7. What specific suggestions for improving the articles can you make?

The place in which it should improve it as described ahead is very few, and these are
very good articles.For me to be able to do is to decorate these articles. Because
these articles hardly have the necessity for mending the content, the improved point
is not found. However, if figure and the picture are added, it might be good because it
is read that it is only an explanation and there is worry that gets tired.



8. Identify three basic differences between how your group would author a similar
document and how this author authored it (as you see it in the link).
If we one propose it, it is likely to become a content that looks like these articles. And,
the second will add figure and the picture to the article. Because the person who
reads is not made get tired, it is very important. The explanation of the word will be
added to those articles at the end.It is necessary to explain to the word that we have
already known when there is a person who doesn't know.

9. Study the following video carefully and then summarize 10 major points that you
were able to understand.
It talks about how to track the cellular phone with GPS in this video.
Even if the cellular phone is stolen, it is possible to search it out by the GPS function.
The provider of carrying and the Internet has permitted the GPS function to be put.It
becomes very easy to begin to look for the person who has the thing that the function
has adhered.
There are a lot of people who have iphone recently.It can be lost, and it detect it with
GPS even if going to various places.It becomes an enough clue to look for so that the
sending history and time may record in carrying.

10. Study the following video carefully and then summarize 10 major points that you
were able to understand.
The method of searching for whereabouts by using iphone was described. There is an
application to which the GPS function adheres in iphone, and it can search for my
whereabouts.
When the place that searches is retrieved and the button is pushed, the vicinity in the
place is displayed.And, to look for more in detail if the vicinity of the destination is
displayed, the zoom is done.The place that searches is understood in detail from
expanding the map. It can search easily for whereabouts and the destination by using
the GPS function with iphone like this.

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  • 1. 1. What is the primary idea of the content in the articles? These two articles are written about the GPS function. First of all, the function and the car navigation system of GPS were explained in the first article. It was the second article that many were especially explained that about the GPS function. GPS provides the function of calculating the destination and discovering a new road from the map. This is one of important information in the article that GPS detects the place by using the satellite. 2. Do you think the individual sections and headings in the document (articles) clearly represent the idea that was communicated. Explain the reasons behind your comments. I think the individual sections and headings in the document (articles) clearly represent the idea that was communicated. Because a detailed explanation of the function of GPS and the usage of the car navigation system is written, and there was a part linked with finding. Very clearly because of comprehensible details after that and explaining by finding the article. Because these two articles have written not only the explanation but also the procedure, it is easy for the person who reads. 3. What details are included in the articles? First of all, the first article explains the operational procedure of the car navigation system. It starts from applying the engine of the car, and the method of looking for the route to the destination is written.And, the car navigation system is guided in the map of the voice and the display. The explanation of the function of GPS is written in the second article, and GPS is a meaning named global positing system. GPS keeps the relation to the car navigation system by discovering the destination, and sending the signal of the place from the satellite.
  • 2. 4. Was there anything that was confusing? If so, what is it? It is not an article that causes confusion. However, it might be very kind to add the explanation for the person who doesn't know the satellite. 5. What is good about the writing? Why is it good? The first article may be very legible. It can be actually easily operated by explaining the procedure.As for the second article, it is divided by heading, and the explanation of GPS should be written in detail.And, because details of the GPS function are explained as for the article, it is a good point.These articles do a comprehensible explanation to the person who doesn't know the car navigation system and GPS.Because the plan to the destination in addition to the basis of the car navigation system and the explanation of the GPS satellite is supported, it is good. 6. Are there any errors that need to be corrected? As for these articles, the place in which it was already correct, and mended was not found.However, you may add that the GPS function is used for not only the car navigation system but also other functions.The understanding of the GPS function will rise if it does so.Moreover, because the content thickens by adding the explanation of the satellite, it might be good. 7. What specific suggestions for improving the articles can you make? The place in which it should improve it as described ahead is very few, and these are very good articles.For me to be able to do is to decorate these articles. Because these articles hardly have the necessity for mending the content, the improved point is not found. However, if figure and the picture are added, it might be good because it is read that it is only an explanation and there is worry that gets tired. 8. Identify three basic differences between how your group would author a similar document and how this author authored it (as you see it in the link).
  • 3. If we one propose it, it is likely to become a content that looks like these articles. And, the second will add figure and the picture to the article. Because the person who reads is not made get tired, it is very important. The explanation of the word will be added to those articles at the end.It is necessary to explain to the word that we have already known when there is a person who doesn't know. 9. Study the following video carefully and then summarize 10 major points that you were able to understand. It talks about how to track the cellular phone with GPS in this video. Even if the cellular phone is stolen, it is possible to search it out by the GPS function. The provider of carrying and the Internet has permitted the GPS function to be put.It becomes very easy to begin to look for the person who has the thing that the function has adhered. There are a lot of people who have iphone recently.It can be lost, and it detect it with GPS even if going to various places.It becomes an enough clue to look for so that the sending history and time may record in carrying. 10. Study the following video carefully and then summarize 10 major points that you were able to understand. The method of searching for whereabouts by using iphone was described. There is an application to which the GPS function adheres in iphone, and it can search for my whereabouts. When the place that searches is retrieved and the button is pushed, the vicinity in the place is displayed.And, to look for more in detail if the vicinity of the destination is displayed, the zoom is done.The place that searches is understood in detail from expanding the map. It can search easily for whereabouts and the destination by using the GPS function with iphone like this.