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1. What is the primary idea of the content in the articles?

The primary idea of these articles is about GPS(Global Positioning System) navigation system. One of
these article explains about how to use GPS navigation system. Another one states how do GPS
navigation system work. first one sparated into several detailed orders reader can know how to control
GPS navigation system line the orders. Another one exlains about how the GPS navigation system
working. For example, how the GPS navigation system get the information about position.


2. Do you think the individual sections and headings in the document (articles) clearly represent the
idea that was communicated. Explain the reasons behind your comments.

I think the individual sections and headings in the articles clearly represent the idea that was
communicated in these two articles. At first artocle, title and headings says it will explain about how to
control GPS navigaion system. Then in the individual sections, it states the oders of operations. Another
article expains this article will explain about how do the GPS navigation system work at title and
headings. Of course, it states the details theories which about stellites, calculating methods or algorithms.


3. What details are included in the articles?

First article that explains about how to use GPS navigation system, it was separated into two sections.
One explains how to selecet destinations. Another one is about select routes. In the first section, it state
methods that start from read the instrucrtions and turn on the car's ignition to listen to the voice and turn
handle of car. Another section explains how to select route. This section start from how to select category
and key word search to how to decide your choice and how to find your destination.


4. Was there anything that was confusing? If so, what is it?

I think there are no so many confusing expressions. In the first article, it says it will explain about
methods of use GPS navigation system. Then is the article main paragraph it states about how to use GPS
navigation system. There is no cufusing states I think. Another article says this article will explain about
how do car navigations system work. Then in the main paragraph it also states about the system and
structure of GPS navigation system. But It think these two article are too minutes. It should be more
simple for reader.


5. What is good about the writing? Why is it good?

These two article is good at division I think. These article are also devided into some individual sections.
This is a very good method to convey some message to reader. Surely, this will help reader understand
easier than there is no division in article. Another article is also good at division. If it will be long what
you want to tell reader, it should be divided into some small individual sections. In this article, I think
writer did this. So I think these article is good at division of section.


6. Are there any errors that need to be corrected?
There are no so many errors that need to be corrected in these articles I think. This is my summary in
these article. But in fact, there are have some small errors. At first, in the first article which explains how
to use GPS navigation system. I think this article's states is too minutes for reader. It no need explains
about how to ignit the car engine. Another article which explains about how do car navigaition system
work. This article's aragraph is too long. It should be divide into some more small individual sections.


7. What specific suggestions for improving the articles can you make?

In the first article which explains about how to use GPS navigation system. I think this article's individual
sections are too minute. It is no use explain about how to ingnit the car engine. this order will be deleted.
Too long explanation will leak reader's attention. Another article which explains about how do car
navigation system work. I think this article have some too long paragraphs. Too long paragraph is no so
good for this type article. So I think it should be divided into some small individual sections.


8. Identify three basic differences between how your group would author a similar document and
how this author authored it (as you see it in the link).

A. I will make it more simple than these two articles. I think these two article's explanation is too long. It
should be more shorter and easier.
B. We will use more pictures or different fonts. There are no any pictures or diffrent fonts in these two
articles. I think this will bore reader. So it should be more colorful to attract reader's attention.
C. I think these article is too minute. There are no use to explains about how to ignit car engine or states
what is a satellite. It should be more simple.


9. Study the following video carefully and then summarize 10 major points that you were able to
understand.
http://www.ehow.co.uk/video_5995996_track-cell-phone-using-gps.html

A. The main idea of this video article is how to track a cell phone using GPS navigating system.
B. There are a couple of different ways to do this.
C. the hardware inside the phone is enabled for GPS location.
D. Family Locator is a service that tell you where your family member are.
E. For 10 dollors per a month you can start take the service of Family Locator.
F. Family Locator can check the location of your family member at an original website.
G. You have to hit a button every time you want to change the location if you use iPhone.
H. MobileMe can find the location of your cellphone.
I. If you lost your cellphone you can find your cellphone's location if you use MobileMe.
J. This video article is presented by Ben from The Cellphone Broker in San Jose, California.


10. Study the following video carefully and then summarize 10 major points that you were able to
understand.
http://www.ehow.co.uk/video_4985120_find-current-location-iphone.html

A. The main idea of this video article is how to find exactly where you are right now with the GPS and
map feature on your iPhone or iPhone 3G.
B. To find out where you are currently you want to hit center button of iPhone.
C. Use this application you can find the location where you are now.
D. You can zoom in or zoom out only touch once at iPhone's touch panel.
E. iPhone is a usefull tool not only for common cellphone's ability
F. If you zoom in, you can know more exactly location.
G. You can change the location that you know not only where you now.
H. This application is add in to iPhone at 3G.
I. This application will slower than any other application, because it will get location information from
satellite.
J. This video article is presented by Rokosz, digital lifestyle expert.

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  • 1. 1. What is the primary idea of the content in the articles? The primary idea of these articles is about GPS(Global Positioning System) navigation system. One of these article explains about how to use GPS navigation system. Another one states how do GPS navigation system work. first one sparated into several detailed orders reader can know how to control GPS navigation system line the orders. Another one exlains about how the GPS navigation system working. For example, how the GPS navigation system get the information about position. 2. Do you think the individual sections and headings in the document (articles) clearly represent the idea that was communicated. Explain the reasons behind your comments. I think the individual sections and headings in the articles clearly represent the idea that was communicated in these two articles. At first artocle, title and headings says it will explain about how to control GPS navigaion system. Then in the individual sections, it states the oders of operations. Another article expains this article will explain about how do the GPS navigation system work at title and headings. Of course, it states the details theories which about stellites, calculating methods or algorithms. 3. What details are included in the articles? First article that explains about how to use GPS navigation system, it was separated into two sections. One explains how to selecet destinations. Another one is about select routes. In the first section, it state methods that start from read the instrucrtions and turn on the car's ignition to listen to the voice and turn handle of car. Another section explains how to select route. This section start from how to select category and key word search to how to decide your choice and how to find your destination. 4. Was there anything that was confusing? If so, what is it? I think there are no so many confusing expressions. In the first article, it says it will explain about methods of use GPS navigation system. Then is the article main paragraph it states about how to use GPS navigation system. There is no cufusing states I think. Another article says this article will explain about how do car navigations system work. Then in the main paragraph it also states about the system and structure of GPS navigation system. But It think these two article are too minutes. It should be more simple for reader. 5. What is good about the writing? Why is it good? These two article is good at division I think. These article are also devided into some individual sections. This is a very good method to convey some message to reader. Surely, this will help reader understand easier than there is no division in article. Another article is also good at division. If it will be long what you want to tell reader, it should be divided into some small individual sections. In this article, I think writer did this. So I think these article is good at division of section. 6. Are there any errors that need to be corrected?
  • 2. There are no so many errors that need to be corrected in these articles I think. This is my summary in these article. But in fact, there are have some small errors. At first, in the first article which explains how to use GPS navigation system. I think this article's states is too minutes for reader. It no need explains about how to ignit the car engine. Another article which explains about how do car navigaition system work. This article's aragraph is too long. It should be divide into some more small individual sections. 7. What specific suggestions for improving the articles can you make? In the first article which explains about how to use GPS navigation system. I think this article's individual sections are too minute. It is no use explain about how to ingnit the car engine. this order will be deleted. Too long explanation will leak reader's attention. Another article which explains about how do car navigation system work. I think this article have some too long paragraphs. Too long paragraph is no so good for this type article. So I think it should be divided into some small individual sections. 8. Identify three basic differences between how your group would author a similar document and how this author authored it (as you see it in the link). A. I will make it more simple than these two articles. I think these two article's explanation is too long. It should be more shorter and easier. B. We will use more pictures or different fonts. There are no any pictures or diffrent fonts in these two articles. I think this will bore reader. So it should be more colorful to attract reader's attention. C. I think these article is too minute. There are no use to explains about how to ignit car engine or states what is a satellite. It should be more simple. 9. Study the following video carefully and then summarize 10 major points that you were able to understand. http://www.ehow.co.uk/video_5995996_track-cell-phone-using-gps.html A. The main idea of this video article is how to track a cell phone using GPS navigating system. B. There are a couple of different ways to do this. C. the hardware inside the phone is enabled for GPS location. D. Family Locator is a service that tell you where your family member are. E. For 10 dollors per a month you can start take the service of Family Locator. F. Family Locator can check the location of your family member at an original website. G. You have to hit a button every time you want to change the location if you use iPhone. H. MobileMe can find the location of your cellphone. I. If you lost your cellphone you can find your cellphone's location if you use MobileMe. J. This video article is presented by Ben from The Cellphone Broker in San Jose, California. 10. Study the following video carefully and then summarize 10 major points that you were able to understand. http://www.ehow.co.uk/video_4985120_find-current-location-iphone.html A. The main idea of this video article is how to find exactly where you are right now with the GPS and map feature on your iPhone or iPhone 3G. B. To find out where you are currently you want to hit center button of iPhone. C. Use this application you can find the location where you are now.
  • 3. D. You can zoom in or zoom out only touch once at iPhone's touch panel. E. iPhone is a usefull tool not only for common cellphone's ability F. If you zoom in, you can know more exactly location. G. You can change the location that you know not only where you now. H. This application is add in to iPhone at 3G. I. This application will slower than any other application, because it will get location information from satellite. J. This video article is presented by Rokosz, digital lifestyle expert.