Peer5
- 1. (1) What is the primary idea of the content in the articles? Car navigation system which depend on a global positioning system tell us where streets are located on the surface of the earth. And GPS use a network of satellites with radio transmitters. In addition, GPS receiver tell how much further it is from one satellite than it is from another and can calculate its total distance from each satellite. Moreover, it is possible to get the signals contain information about the time, position and identity of each satellite. (2) Do you think the individual sections and headings in the document (articles) clearly represent the idea that was communicated. Explain the reasons behind your comments. The individual sections and headings in the document is very easy to understand for reader. Making individual sections is cohesive and easy to guess contents of document before reading. Moreover, individual sections is easy to see. And it is possible to sort out the necessary information easily. In addition, the headings show abstract information. If the document have the long sentence, the reader confuse. But the reader avoid confusing by making he individual section and headings in the document. (3) What details are included in the articles? The first article included detail instruction of how to use a Map-Based GPS Car Navigation System. The article write the instruction step by step in detail for reader. And the article write the specific directions and the state of GPS navigation system screen. The second article included detail explanation of Navigation System. The article explain the Car Navigation Basic and GPS Satellites and Calculating Location. The detail sentence show that there have to be at least four GPS satellites near enough for it to pick up a signal for working car navigation system. And the article explain how calculate location. (4) Was there anything that was confusing? If so, what is it? In case the reader is in front of the GPS Car Navigation System screen, the reader is able to understand easily. This is because the specific direction and the state of GPS navigation system screen can help the reader to understand clearly. On other hand, in case the reader is in front of the GPS Car Navigation System screen, the reader can not understand the term which is provided direct. The reason is the reader is not able to image the state of GPS navigation system screen. (5) What is good about the writing? Why is it good? These article is very good about writing. The reason is following. First, the article represent the individual sections and headings in the document. So, the reader is able to understand the content of the document. Second, the article explain instruction of the GPS Car Navigation System step by step. So the reader is able to make out the instruction without confusing. Third, the article include the explanation of related to the information about how do car navigation system work. So the reader can understand deeply more over.
- 2. (6) Are there any errors that need to be corrected? There is no error that need to be corrected. (7) What specific suggestions for improving the articles can you make? There is specific suggestions for improving the article. Because in case the reader is in front of the GPS Car Navigation System screen, the reader can not understand the term which is provided direction and image the state of GPS navigation system screen. So I include the illustration about the provided direction and the state of GPS navigation system screen. By this, the reader is able to understand the abstract information of instruction clearly more over. (8) Identify three basic differences between how your group would author a similar document and how this author authored it (as you see it in the link). There are three basic differences between how our group wold author a similar document. First, the article sentence is long than our document. We make well-organized sentence in the document. By this, we avoid becoming the long sentence. Second, the article have no illustrations but our document include the illustrations. By insert the illustration, the reader can make out the instruction more over. Third, our document include the abstract explanation to absorb easily more over for the reader unlike the article. (9) Study the following video carefully and then summarize 10 major points that you were able to understand. 1. It is possible to track a cellphone using GPS. 2. There are different ways to track a cell phone using GPS. 3. The hardware inside the phone is enabled for GPS location. 4. There is the service which track of family. 5. There is the service where family are. 6. If the iPhone has been stolen, it is possible to go online on the Internet and track down where the iPhone is. 7. There is a piece of technology called MobileMe for iPhone. 8. iPhone does not continuously update. 9. We have to hit a button every time we want to change the location 10. The service will tell you where the phone is but in terms of tracking the phone it's not really that efficient. (10) 10. Study the following video carefully and then summarize 10 major points that you were able to understand. 1. It is possible to find exactly where you are right now with the GPS on iPhone. 2. It is possible to find out where you are currently you want by hitting a littele button. 3. It is possible to zoom in a little bit closer. 4. The closer map has the more information. 5. If you hit it again just perk it up and you can see in a little bit closer. 6. The iPhone is very convenient. Because the iPhone have feature of GPS. 7. By hitting the target, we can find current location. 8. We can see a massive thing to get down relatively close by GPS. 9. By GPS,we can see that in a moment it will start to home. 10. We get new information of location by GPS.