Peer reviewexercise#1
- 1. I choce Group A. 1. Explain the complete organization of the content in the document. I think that content of Group A is not complete organization because question one answer is wrong. Question one is written "Write an e-mail to me (your instructor) explaining the following". But, I think that Group A don't write e-mail forms. For reason of the above, I think that Group A is not complete organization. 2. Do you think the individual sections and headings in the document clearly represent the idea that was communicated. Explain the reasons behind your comments. I think that individual sections and headings in the document of Group A is not clear because document of Group A don't write question of individual sections. If Group A write question of individual sections, I think that the document of Group A became more easy to read and understand. 3. What details are included in the document? Group A intends to prepare the large sized amusement into Aizu because there are few large sized amusements around Aizu which a lot of people can play. They intends to build the amusement at the station. the amusement include game section,karaoke section and food and drink section. I think the amusement is very interesting. 4. Was there anything that was confusing? If so, what is it? I wrote even the above, I was confused a little because individual sections and headings in the document was not written. After all, I think that I had better write individual sections and headings in the document . I think that it is convenient for the person who look at those questions. 5. What is good about the writing? Why is it good? I think that the setting of an amusement planning of this group is very careful, and I think that it is very great. I think that setting written in D of problem one in particular is very careful. I think that it is very great to decide report society properly. 6. Are there any errors that need to be corrected? For the feeling that I read, I think that there was not the mistake of the word and grammatically. It is to have written a place to write it in an email form of problem one if I say daringly. If there is written in an email form, I think that this homework may have been perfect. 7. What specific suggestions for improving the document can you make? I wrote even the above, I think that it is improved with that alone if Group A write individual sections and headings in the document of Group A and writing problem one in an email form. It is not thought
- 2. about the place where I can be improved that much from this problem. 8. Identify three basic differences between how your group authored the document and how this group authored it? At first, how to answer problem one is different. Because I wrote it as contents of the emails in the group of us, I can just tie it without writing a problem sentence. Second, I think that with detail of the setting is different. Finaly, I think that the easiness in seeing of the answer is different.