Working with Lawyers

Advice to Plain Language Experts
              from

        Cheryl Stephens
Clarity International
http://www.clarity-international.net/

   Video is based on an article in
    Clarity Journal #66
Cheryl Stephens




The Plain Language Wizard
Scourge
Helping Lawyers
• The nature of lawyers’ writing tasks
• How to work with the lawyer
  temperament
• Work more effectively with lawyers
Daily Legal Writing
Legal Writing Product

Lawyers write 2 kinds of documents

• Part of daily life or business

• Creating rights and setting up duties
Transactional Drafting
What Is Legal Drafting
2 types of drafting:

•Transactional--dealings between
people

• Legislative--between people and
governments
Legislative
Research on Lawyer Personality

   Lawyers are different from
   the most common
   personality types
   in the general population.
There is a Typical Lawyer
Lawyers
who don’t fit pattern
   go into other
   fields of law
Lawyer Attitudes
   Lawyers are
    • Skeptics
    • Pessimists
    • Cynics
    • Wary

Be prepared emotionally.
Lawyers Are Left-brained
Technical competence
Valued over
emotional intelligence.
Accept the lack of rapport,
cold reserve, and
lack of interpersonal connection.
Don’t Expect Warmth




                  Sandor Weisz photo
Lawyers Want Critical Analysis
   • Primed to criticize.
   • Not likely to see the positive.
   • Trained to expect the worst.
        Uncomfortable
     saying anything positive.

  You must not expect praise.
Traditional and Conservative
Lawyers Are Traditional
 Won’t see benefit of change involving
 risk. Risk-averse by nature.




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photo
Constant High Urgency

• Need quick conclusion.

• A quick decision, likely a “no”.

Allow time for careful thought.
Put It in Writing
Independent and Autonomous
   • Not team players.
   • Competitive.
   • Profession rewards
       individual performance.
Lawyers want to control
    when and how
   they invest time,
 complete tasks, and
adopt new techniques.
By Nature Adversarial
  –Tolerant of conflict.
  –Aggressive by training.
  –Sensitive and thin-skinned.

• Don’t get defensive or emotional.
• Don’t make it personal.
• Appeal to competitive nature.
Crave Structure and Organization
   • Hate disorganization,
     inefficiencies.
   • No patience for the planning.
   • Need detail.
   • Want clear objectives.
Like Clear Structure
Create a Work Plan
Schedules, closure on
decisions, planning, follow
through, and a "cut-to-the-chase”
approach.
Stick to deadlines.
Expect the lawyer to do the
same.
Organize Communication Process

Get lawyer involved early in the process,
but get client permission.        Mike
                                 Licht, NotionsCapita
                                 l.com photo
Protocol of Communication
• Recruit intermediaries.
• Try to connect with the lawyer.
• Be aware:
      They hear things literally.
You can work more
effectively with lawyers
Show Respect for Legalities
You Write for the Client or Public




Low                            High
When Persuasion Is Needed
Provide examples of plain language.
Clarity increases precision.
Not an experiment:
an economic or market imperative.
Prove Your Point
Words and Phrases Judicially-Considered
Lawyers’ Concept of Justice
Justice means achieving well-defined
and expected outcomes.

Abstract ideal of justice
not a motivator.

     Get them to share a goal –
          like access to justice.
Cheryl Stephens
Plain Language Wizard
PlainLanguage.com


E m a i l @ cherylstephens.com
PlainLanguageWizardry.com
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