Facebook Killer Script-Not yet finshed 2nd Draft
- 1. Facebook Killer written by Kadin Melymok A cold rainy and drowsy day, wind blows outside, branches on trees move. Inside of Elliots house he sits on a black chair only staring at a clock with no emotion on his face. on a wall as he stares, the clock ticks and ticks over and over again. Than he hears two kids outside his window who are about the age of 9 or 10 he goes to look outside the window Kid 1 I don't care if its going to be fun or not i'm not going to get in trouble again like I did last time. Saying in a loud ragging voice to his friend while walking forwards and backwards Kid 2 Oh come on don't be such a chicken.Saying Anaxiously. While holding one hand in his pocket and makking motions with the other Elliot still watches the two kids bicker but than than one of the kids notices that he's Eliiot is wathcing and than the kids get a scared expresion on his face Kid 2 Tommy,Tommy can we get out of here . While leaning backwards in a falling motion pointing up with his index finger Kid 1 He looks up and see's elliot staring. Yeah lets get out of here fast Than they both sprint away. Than he goes back to his chair and sits and did exactly what he was doing before, wathcing the clock tic. Than the screen fades out and than it says the next morning. He's still watching the clock and sitting. But he hears a knock on the door he gets up to answer it. When he arives he see's someone dressed in decent cloths The man Hi my name is Dan sherkens. He tries to shake Elliot's hand, And you are? Elliot just stares at the man and does not shake his hand, Elliot glares at him for longer
- 2. Dan Okay so you are not a big people person.He looks through the files in his hand.Ah okay your names Elliot Newson. Well I mies well get to the point. I have a understanding that you are 16. While looking through files And since your still under aged the law requires you to have to still go to school. Is your mother here by any chance so I could speak with her Elliot in a dark but quiet voice he speaks She's out. Elliot tries to close the door But dan grabs the side of the door before he can Dan Wait you do realize that this means your going to have to enroll into a public school. You know with other kids your age and unfortunally for you its not a option. Dan was about to get frushtuated. I have already put you in a school that is not to far from here I'm expecting to see you there monday morning. And if I don't there will be conqinces. UNDERSTAND? Elliot Perfect. Elliot closes the door and than goes back to his room and watches the clock tick. 2 days later its Monday morning Elliot arives at school and sees a group of 6 kids about his age He stares at a girl whos name is Tiffany Tiffiany Tiffinay looks at Elliot there about 7 meteres apart while shes in a group of friends and Elliot is alone by a shed. Who is that creep over there starring at me a guy named Jacob in the group responds Jacob I don't know hes probaly just some new guy who thinks your cute don't bother Tiffinay While he sure knows how to check someone out. He's like seriously giving me the creeps Another girl in the group tells Tiffinay Sidney Oh come on alot of guys stare at you he's not the only one Tiffany
- 3. Yeah sure but they don't stare at me like that The school bell rings Sidney grabs Tiffany arm sidney It's okay alright I'm always going to be here for you They walk inside Elliot takes his seat in the classroom he watches the clock and just sits there until the end of the day Elliot sees the group of kids again by the side of the building hanging out he stays fairy distntant from them.He still hears them though Tiffany Omg Jessie just unfriended me on Facebook like wow I din't do anything to her A asian male boy named cho talks Cho While I only gor 25 friends on Facebook I don't know what your complaing about Tiffany Omg its that creep again like really he won't stop bein a pedo Jacob yells at him Jacob Yo loser mind your own business! Elliot walks away and than he arives at home and goes in his room on his computer and than searches up Facebook.com He makes a account on it to see what it is the next day at school he goes through a list of names at school to find out what there first and last names are to add them on facebook Than sidney walks in the room and with a suprised emotion being on her face she asks Sidney
- 4. What are you doing? What do you got in your hand Elliot doesen't respond he just walks out of the room and sets the paper down back onto the table Than sidney is confused on why he would look at that Than Sidney meets up with Tiffany is the hall Sidney Hey Tif, do you got a momment? saying in a calm worried voice Tiffany Yeah sure. What's up? Sidney Well I don't want to make a big deal about it but I saw Elliot looking through the list of class names Tiffany Thats weird why would he do that? Sidney I don't know I just thought I should let you know now lets just put it behind us The scene goes back to Elliot on Facebook Elliot searches Jacob roman and finds the kid matches the Jacob from school and sends Jacob a friend request But than a message comes up saying Jacob Roman has denied your friend request The next day at school Elliot comes in the washroom and Jacob is in the stall but than when jacob is peing Elliot comes and shakes the door Jacob Yo bro who ever you are stop messing around okay I'm trying to take a leak not realzing its Elliot But Elliot keeps shaking bathroom stall door Jacob Okay seriously not funny the stall door becomes unlocked and the stall door opens but when Jacob looks back no one is there the stall door is just swinging Jacob continues to use the washroom but when he's using it Elliot stands 3
- 5. feet behind him without Jacob noticing but when Jacob is done using the washroom he see's Elliot standing right behind him Jacob Oh hey.It's Elliot it right? But than Elliot attacks him and brings him to the ground Jacob sqiggles like a worm but than Elliot grabs a bunch of toilet paper and shoves it up Jacobs mouth while chocking him than Jacob dies in the corner with toliet paper shoved deep up his throat. Elliot than gets a bucket of water and put soap in it than dump it onto every where he touched The next day 2 kid dectectives come in the washroom The kids are around the washroom crying and soaping and than they see 2 dectevies walk in One of the kids named david asked David Who are you guys. About to cry because of the death of his friend Detective Jonson My name is Detective Jonson me and my partner Detective Patterson were assighned this case just yesterday David You look quite young to be detectives Dectective patterson That's because we work for D.A.Y David Never heard of it. Am I suppose to be impressed Detective jonson If you want. But what it stands for is Detective Agency for youths meaning that when kids around are age get killed its ushally are job finding out who the killer was. It can be dandgedrous at times but we get used to it David Okay just promise me one thing
- 6. Dectective patterson What's that? David That you'll find out who did this I want to put this guy down Detective jonson Don't worry its what we do David Walks out of the washroom Dectective jonson asks his partner Any finger prints? Detective patterson The dectective kneels on his feet and turns his neck back and fourth. Nope who ever this guy is knows how to cover there tracks. Dectective jonson Standing tall and straight outside of the stall. Isen't there any cameras in this place Dectective patterson Dectective stands up. Nope its a law to have no cameras in these washrooms Dectective Jonson While thats not to useful than. No finger prints no cameras what else do we got? Dectective patterson While there was a report .There was quite a bit amount of water when he was found. The water could of been used to clean up finger prints Detective Jhonson That easy hah? While I'll be damed. Look we promised that kid well find this killer and bring him to justice so no matter what we find any tiny piece of evident we got. Detective patterson Beleive me I completly agree with you but how do you suppose to do that. We can't find any thing. I mean the guy covered his tracks by dumping water on the stalls for frick sakes
- 7. Detective Jhonson Wait just a minute. Looking behind him at the sinks Detective patterson What? looking curiously at his partner Detective jhonson If he dumped water on the stalls and there was a decent ammount of h20 he would need something bigger than just his hands. Detective patterson Your right he would need something like a bucket and to get that he would had to walk out to get it and the camera would of caught him on tape Detective jhonson Your right, now I'm going to find the securty tape Detective patterson How bout me? What do I do? Detective jhonson You stay put meet me at my house later we'll watch the footage Detective patterson Okay fine. See you later I guess 2 hours late the 2 dectective meet at Dectective Jhonsons house they watch the security tape but when they watch it theres nothing Dectective jhonson Littarlly the whole tape theres not even one person passing by. Not even the kid, Jacob is on there walking to the washroom Detective patterson I think we may of under estimated this guy.who ever this guy is he planned it. Detective Jhonson
- 8. Why would he plan this. We need to talk to all of Jacobs friends and find out who was last with him when he died Detective patterson Yeah but well do that tomrorow cause its late and i'm looking forward hot pancakes in the morning. Detective jhonson puts on his coat to leave Detective jhonson I'll see you tomorow. He walks out the door Detective patterson See ya. Sitting on the couch he continues to watch the tape Detective jhonson Enjoy your pancakes. The detective walks out the door Elliot is back on his computer at home he searches up David uther and adds him on facebook but it takes 3 hours for him to respond and than he has a message on Facebook from David the message says David Screw off dude. I ain't ever going to add you to my friends list go back to where you came from Anus Licker Elliot sends a message back Elliot You shouldn't of said that. David Aw. Are those your first words. Your so cute little baby. Now go away I'm busy. The scene goes to David's house. David closes his computer david goes in his bed and lies down. The camera shows David sleeping but it also shows Elliot laying right next to him And Elliot stares hardcore at him but than David realizes he's there David
- 9. Who Who are you? Saying while backing up to the wall Elliot Do I not look Fammilar to you. On his knees with a knife in his hand on the bed David Oh my god Elliot is that you? Elliot So now you show me some respect. Let me tell you a true story now. David Get away from me you fricken creep. Elliot pulls tape from his pocket and tapes Davids Mouth Elliot Oh what a mouth you got on you. Now would you let me finish. David tries to scream but the tape is blocking his vocals Now to the story.Once upon a time there was this boy named David you see he was just like you in fact he was you. One of the nights David was laying in bed than a person who was dressed darkly came along and had a little chat with David. Than guest what happens next? That person cut Davids throat and made sure he bled to death David screams louder and sturgles and struggles Than after David was dead. That dark person decided to take a vist to Karren Uther. David screams even louder through the tape again Oh do you reconize that name? Well anyways Karren is David's mom. and than the Dark person stabs Karren right in the stomach she than dies from over excessive bleeding. Oh what a shame i'm sure Karren was a deccen't person but everyone dies at some point in there life. David screams even louder and louder Well anyways lets get to it shall we Elliot stabs and cuts a slice of Davids neck
- 10. The next scene is in a room that Elliot walks in but than the door closer but the camera only shows the door but the camera can still hear screaming and suffering than when Elliot walks out theres blood all over his hand.