Instinct second draft
- 1. Instinct First Draft By Georgia Bull Daniella Crystal India Anning Original Screenplay c/o Fine Arts College, Hampstead georgiabull1@gmail.com
- 2. 1 INT.GYM.DAY 1 Feet pound on a treadmill. Amy a young blond haired pretty girl in leggings and a sweaty top stares down at a phone she is holding. Her pace is slow as she focuses on the phone. This is a busy gym, with thumping music. Amy gets off the treadmill 2 INT.LOCKER ROOM. DAY 2 An empty locker. The locker door is slammed shut. Amy is now wearing a hoody. She slings her bag over her shoulder dropping an item onto the floor. A hand reaches down and picks up what appears to be a tampon. This is David a young lad wearing football shorts covering some leggings and a shell tracksuit top in garish eighties colours. He hands the Tampon to Amy DAVID Hey Amy A moment DAVID Shit i Keep dropping my tampons Brad puts the tampon in his pocket I don’t know why I was handing it to you Brad smiles affectionately Amy Looks at Brad, a little coyly but clearly enjoying the encounter better work on these guns AMY work hard! Brad leaves the locker room. Amy watches him as he leaves. hmmm 3 INT.GIRLS BEDROOM.NIGHT 3 Amy walks into her bedroom in her white dressing gown and her hair is tied up in a towel whilst brushing her teeth. She has just had a shower and is getting ready for bed. As she is walking she stumps her toe on her chair. (CONTINUED)
- 3. CONTINUED: 2. She hears a ping which is from a notification on her laptop. She has recieved a facebook request from Brad. She smiles when she recieves this. David sends Amy a message straight away. DAVID’S FACEBOOK MESSAGE Turns out the tampon wasn’t very useful for me after all... But it was nice seeing you earlier today. AMY’S FACEBOOK MESSAGE I would never of guessed! It was nice seeing you too! Would love it if i could have the tampon returned to its owner (laughing face emoji) DAVID’S FACEBOOK MESSAGE Is that you asking me out on a date?! AMY’S FACEBOOK MESSAGE No that’s me asking for my tampon back. But if you want to call it a date... DAVID’S FACEBOOK MESSAGE Ill message you later about details x 4 EXT.CARNABY STREET. DAY 4 David and Amy are walking along Carnaby Street laughing. Amy looks at Brad and touches his arm. AMY I can really see a difference of your guns! DAVID Oh ive actually come to the conclusion that this whole gym scene isn’t for me! AMY You’ve only just realised! Brad pushes her flirtatously. You shouldn’t worry about your (MORE) (CONTINUED)
- 4. CONTINUED: 3. AMY (cont’d) looks as long as your happy with yourself. DAVID That’s a good opinion to have, im glad. AMY Ok, lets not turn this into a therapy session! Im hungry lets go get some lunch. DAVID My treat of course. Brad and Amy walk towards resturant. 5 INT.GIRLS BEDROOM.DAY 5 Amy and her two bestfriends are sitting on her friend Rachel’s couch in her living room. RACHEL he’s not that good looking though is he.. OLIVIA definitely not my type! RACHEL he’s quite geeky no? OLIVIA Amy, you can do so much better! AMY I am starting to like him though! He has a really good personality Rachel and Olivia give eachother a confused look. RACHEL Imagine what everyone else would think when you’re seen with him! OLIVIA I guess it is up to you though. Amy goes quite and looks down. She is upset at her friends reaction. AMY Ive come over feeling really tired, think im going to head home.
- 5. 4. 6 INT.GIRLS BEDROOM.NIGHT 6 Amy walks into her bedroom. She throws her handbag on the floor and lays on her bed sighing. AMY (sighs) Amy sits up and opens her laptop and goes on Facebook Messenger. She has already recieved a message for David. DAVID’S FACEBOOK MESSAGE Do you fancy seeing that new film you’ve been wanting to see this weekend? AMY’S FACEBOOK MESSAGE I need to be honest. I don’t think things are working out between us. I’m sorry DAVID’S FACEBOOK MESSAGE WHAT?! where has this come from? Can we meet up to talk about this?! Amy reads and ignores David’s message. She closes her laptop. 7 INT. FRIEND’S HOUSE. DAY 7 Rachel is hosting a small gathering. There is music,food and alcohol.Amy walks into the room hand in hand with her new boyfriend called Brad. BRAD Im going to get a drink, do you want? AMY I’ll have what you get. Thanks Brad kisses Amy on the forehead. Drunk Rachel and Olivia walk over to Amy who is now standing alone. RACHEL Ammmyyyy!! Rachel pushes Amy on the couch. Im so so jealous of your new boyf!! He is so fit! Brad walks over to the girls. (MORE) (CONTINUED)
- 6. CONTINUED: 5. RACHEL (cont’d) Speaking of the devil! Brad gives Amy her drink. OLIVIA So Brad, are you having fun? BRAD Yee Olivia seems confused by Brad’s blunt reply. OLIVIA Gooood, and where about’s do you live? BRAD Hampstead Rachel is drunk and starts falling on Olivia RACHEL You wanna say more than a one word answer you boring shit! AMY Rachel! RACHEL it’s true! Olivia pulls Rachel away boringgggggg AMY Brad, can we talk outside privately? BRAD Course my beauty AMY What did i tell you about calling me cringy names! You know i don’t like that! Brad and Amy walk outside 8 EXT. GARDEN OF FRIEND’S HOUSE. DAY 8 Brad and Amy are standing outside in the garden on the patio. (CONTINUED)
- 7. CONTINUED: 6. BRAD So come on then, what do you want to talk about AMY I’ve just been thinking lately and i have realised we don’t have that much in common and i don’t really feel a spark between us. Brad looks down on the floor. I’m sorry but i need to be honest. BRAD Ok Brad opens the garden door and walks inside. 9 INT.GIRLS KITCHEN.NIGHT 9 Amy walks into her kitchen. On the kitchen table is her laptop closed. she sits down and opens her laptop She walks to the table and sits down. She opens her laptop and goes on her Facebook. She sends a message to David AMY’S FACEBOOK MESSAGE hey, I really think we should talk. can we meet up? Amy walks to the fridge and grabs a box of mango. standing by the fridge Amy hears a Facebook notification. Her head turns to the direction of the laptop. The screen blacks out. THE END.