The Art of Messaging
                 Bridget Meade
Online content developer, ThisisReno.com monkey
               bridgetmeade.com
              bmeade@gmail.com
                 @frogthrower
Words. Feelings. Connection.
Public relations messaging:

     “… very terse communications that pair a product or a
     company with a strong positive emotion or feeling. They
     can be expressed in very few words, but they
     communicate a great deal.” – Doug Richards, School for
     Startups
You should care.
• Business objective
• Marketing
     • (psst… this includes social media)
• Crisis communication
• News and events
• Funding
You have 15 seconds.

• Services and/or products offered

• Ideal potential customers’ needs
Crafting your message.


“Substitute ‘damn’ every time you want to write
 ‘very;’ your editor will delete it and the writing
    will be just as it should be.” – Mark Twain
Keep it simple.
• Brevity is better.
     • Too much text is truly terrible.
• Use language everyone will understand.
     • Avoid acronyms and industry jargon.
     • Big words don’t necessarily make you sound smarter.
There, they’re, their.
• Proper spelling, grammar and punctuation.
     • Active vs. passive voice
            » Active: “We serve Blue Bottle coffee.”
            » Passive: “We will provide hot coffee.”
     • Resources:
            » Grammar Girl (http://grammar.quickanddirtytips.com)
            » Google
            » AP Style Guide (on and offline)

• SCREAMING.
     • Don’t.
Proofread!
•   Visual aid
•   Read it backwards
•   Read aloud
•   FLAG ALL ERRORS
•   Have a friend?
Remember:
• Your message goes everywhere.
• Proofread.
• Writing mechanics matter.
Thank you!
• Case studies? (Progressive has a doozy.)
• Messaging problems? Let’s talk.
Progressive’s regression
• What happened
    • Matt Fisher’s sister Katie (a Progressive customer) was killed
      in a car accident
    • Other driver was underinsured
    • Progressive refused to pay out on her policy
    • Fisher’s family sued the other driver in order to take
      Progressive to court
    • Progressive appeared in court to defend the other driver but
      denied it
    • When Fisher started tweeting at them, their response was
      canned, unemotional. He responded publicly. So did others.
    • Main problem: failure to respond immediately,
      appropriately, or effectively

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Public Relations Messaging

  • 1. The Art of Messaging Bridget Meade Online content developer, ThisisReno.com monkey bridgetmeade.com bmeade@gmail.com @frogthrower
  • 2. Words. Feelings. Connection. Public relations messaging: “… very terse communications that pair a product or a company with a strong positive emotion or feeling. They can be expressed in very few words, but they communicate a great deal.” – Doug Richards, School for Startups
  • 3. You should care. • Business objective • Marketing • (psst… this includes social media) • Crisis communication • News and events • Funding
  • 4. You have 15 seconds. • Services and/or products offered • Ideal potential customers’ needs
  • 5. Crafting your message. “Substitute ‘damn’ every time you want to write ‘very;’ your editor will delete it and the writing will be just as it should be.” – Mark Twain
  • 6. Keep it simple. • Brevity is better. • Too much text is truly terrible. • Use language everyone will understand. • Avoid acronyms and industry jargon. • Big words don’t necessarily make you sound smarter.
  • 7. There, they’re, their. • Proper spelling, grammar and punctuation. • Active vs. passive voice » Active: “We serve Blue Bottle coffee.” » Passive: “We will provide hot coffee.” • Resources: » Grammar Girl (http://grammar.quickanddirtytips.com) » Google » AP Style Guide (on and offline) • SCREAMING. • Don’t.
  • 8. Proofread! • Visual aid • Read it backwards • Read aloud • FLAG ALL ERRORS • Have a friend?
  • 9. Remember: • Your message goes everywhere. • Proofread. • Writing mechanics matter.
  • 10. Thank you! • Case studies? (Progressive has a doozy.) • Messaging problems? Let’s talk.
  • 11. Progressive’s regression • What happened • Matt Fisher’s sister Katie (a Progressive customer) was killed in a car accident • Other driver was underinsured • Progressive refused to pay out on her policy • Fisher’s family sued the other driver in order to take Progressive to court • Progressive appeared in court to defend the other driver but denied it • When Fisher started tweeting at them, their response was canned, unemotional. He responded publicly. So did others. • Main problem: failure to respond immediately, appropriately, or effectively