Script with dialogue
- 1. Dialogue - ‘Enough’ Page 1 Theme: ‘The world suffers alot. Not because of the violence of bad people, but because of the silence of good people’ INT. HARROW COLLEGE CLASSROOM - DAY Tracking shot of classroom, showing the lesson going on and the students working. The camera stops at Claire. Then there is a close up shot of Claire struggling to do here work Slow piano music to begin the scene, we can see teacher giving a lesson and Claire is distant and not listening, when there is a close up of Claire music fades out and ambiance sound and dialogue begins and we hear the teacher first Teacher Claire, do you have your work to hand into me Claire looks up, middle shot of both of them and Claire just looks down and teacher continues Teacher Claire, I asked you a question, and it's the third time this week Middle shot (high angle) of Claire fidgeting with her necklace and she says Claire I guess I’m sorry Low angle Middle shot of teacher speaking, she is upset and starts raising her voice at Claire, at this point everyone in the classroom is quiet (shot reverse shot) Teacher No Claire, that’s not good enough this is your final year of college how long are you gonna keep this up for and can you look at me when I’m talking to you please stop fidgeting with that necklace
- 2. Dialogue - ‘Enough’ Page 2 Middle shot of Claire looking up and she begins arguing back and doesn’t know how to express herself, as she is shy and embarrassed Claire Miss I said I’m sorry *stutters* I don’t know what to do, I try my best, I really do Middle shot of teacher shouting at Claire Teacher No Claire, I’m sorry but I don’t see you trying, you can’t even give me an excuse Claire starts getting nervous and her eyes start tearing up, middle shot of Claire answering back Claire I don’t know what you want me to say, and you wouldn't understand anyways Over the shoulder shot of teacher telling Claire to get out of the classroom, she points at the door Teacher Claire I honestly don't know what to do with you anymore,you know what just get out! Claire quickly gets up and starts packing her stuff into her bag quickly, everyone is quiet and the teacher is waiting for her to leave. Long shot of Claire packing up and rushing Long shot of Claire leaving with her bag in her hand, and as she rushes to open the door and she drops her necklace, however she doesn’t notice she dropped it and open the door to leave INT. HARROW COLLEGE CORRIDOR - DAY Back long shot of Claire opening the door and leaving. Then we have a tracking shot following Claire up the corridor of the College
- 3. Dialogue - ‘Enough’ Page 3 Middle shot of Claire turning the corner to the toilet she is upset and trying hard not to cry. She looks messy and she drags her bag Tracking over the shoulder shot of Claire opening the toilet door INT. HARROW COLLEGE TOILET - DAY Middle shot of Claire walking into the toilet and rushing to the cubicle High angle shot of Claire in cubicle she is crying and is trying to calm herself down Claire opens the cubicle door and walks to the sink, close up shot of her washing her face she looks up at the mirror. Back over the shoulder shot of her staring at herself in the mirror and wiping her face Slow piano soundtrack starts and she gets her stuff and leaves to go home EXT.PARK - DAY Tracking shot of Claire walking along the pathway of the park Close up shot of Claire walking home with an upset and worried look on her face Long shot of Claire as she continues walking along the pathway of the park with her bag dragging besides her EXT. HOUSE - DAY Back shot of Claire as she approaches the front door of her house
- 4. Dialogue - ‘Enough’ Page 4 Medium shot of Claire putting the key into the door and starts turning it slowly, Claire is shown walking in trying to be as quiet as possible as she doesn't want her dad to know that she’s home INT. HOUSE - DAY Medium shot of Claire walking into the house as slowly and quietly as possible, she closes the door behind her and looks around the house to make sure that no one hears her Low angle shot of Claire walking up the stairs High angle shot as Claire continues walking up the stairs INT. BEDROOM - DAY Long shot Claire walks into her room and places her bag on top of her bed and sits down on the bottom of her bed Middle shot of her grabbing her books and she tries to do some work. That's when she notices that she hasn't got her necklace and looks for it in her bag. Close up of her searching her bag Claire then sits down on the side of her bed with her books she puts her hands on her head and tries to focus so she can do some work this is a medium shot. (ellipses shots start) Claire starts writing and this is when a series of shots start playing to show time passing by (ellipses) as the shots go by there is more crunched paper on the floor and we see her putting her hands on her head and always looking at her door to see if her dad is coming Soundtrack fades out - Claire lays her head on her bed she is tired and hopeless that's when she hears her dad at the door Dad (v.o) Claire,what are you doing, where are you?
- 5. Dialogue - ‘Enough’ Page 5 Shot of the door, claire stands up close up of her frightened face. We hear the door opening, knob turning and Claire dad walks in. She sits down on her bed almost as if she is trying to curl up into a ball, and starts crying and looking up Low angle POV of Claire looking up at the dad Dad Did you buy my cigarettes? Once again you ignored me, you know I hate being ignored Claire The camera slowly leaves the room and the door closes, we see Claire's dad raising his hand. Once the door closes it goes pitch black and we hear screaming, and hands hitting etc INT. OUTSIDE OF BEDROOM STAIRS - NIGHT Door of the room opens and we see a middle shot of Claire running out, everything is fast pace quick cuts Low angle shot at the bottom of the stairs as Clair runs down and she opens the door to leave Fast paced soundtrack in the background as she runs out of the house EXT. STREET OUTSIDE THE HOUSE - NIGHT Close up/ reaction shot of Claire’s facial expression of her crying whilst she runs out of her house Close up shot of Claire’s feet as she continues running away 360० shot of Claireas she stops in the middle of the street and criesnot knowing what to do next Claire sits on a bench and curls up she is cold and stops herself from crying wipes her tears
- 6. Dialogue - ‘Enough’ Page 6 EXT. Harrow College - DAY Tracking shot of claire making her way into the her College Long shot of Claire talking to her teacher Claire Miss I need to talk to you Close up shot of the teacher replying to Claire Teacher Claire calm down, why are you crying? Over the shoulder shot of the teacher as Claire continues to cry and apologises for what happened in class Claire I’m so sorry for the way I reacted yesterday, It’s just I’ve been going through somethings Middle shot of the teacher comforting Claire as she cries for help and hands Claire her necklace Teacher Claire it's okay, just calm down I guess this is yours as well, whatever it is I will help you and support you Medium shot of Claire looking up at the teacher and thanking her Sound track starts and the screen slowly fades out Black screen (the end)