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Write good papers
Daniel Lemire, Ph.D.
Professor of Computer Science
University of Quebec
http://lemire.me/en/
blog: http://lemire.me/blog/
Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
Publish or perish
Yes, if you don’t publish, you perish.
We think by writing. We think well by writing well.
More papers ⇒ more visibility.
Good papers build your reputation, over time.
Bad papers harm your reputation.
Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
What should you write about?
Must be a lasting reference (be ambitious!).
Can you say something unexpected?
Can you define new problems?
Answer new questions?
Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
How to be productive?
1 Come up with hypothesis.
2 Research it.
3 Collect data.
4 Write paper.
5 Submit it quickly to a journal.
6 Become famous!
7 . . .
Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
How to be productive?
1 Come up with hypothesis.
2 Research it.
3 Collect data.
4 Write paper.
5 Submit it quickly to a journal.
6 Become famous!
7 NO! Not how it is done!
Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
How to be productive? (For real this time)
Come up with general topic.
Read everything about it.
Write about what you learn.
Ask new questions. Write them up.
Seek answers in the literature. Ask your peers.
Eventually, you will answer new questions: keep writing it up.
Have different projects, at various stages: emergent, half
done, almost done, in press.
Start writing the papers before the research is completed.
Take your time. Revise your writing continuously.
Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
How much time writing?
Write all the time. Daily.
No need to write 10 hours a day.
Two hours a day is enough to be highly prolific.
Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
To write well
Work over months or years!
Write 1,000,000 words. Publish the best 1,000 words.
Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
Don’t be shy: use good tools
If you must use MS Office: learn to use it properly.
Use a spell checker. Just do it. (e.g., aspell)
Learn LATEX and BibTeX if you do a lot of math.
Use version control (subversion, git).
Use grammar and style checkers: style-check.rb, lacheck.
Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
Things to avoid
Do not use negations.
Avoid the future tense (the word ”will” in English) to refer to
something coming up next in the document.
Avoid temporal words such as “now” or “next”.
Avoid refering to other content with “below” or “above”.
Most adverbs—such as ”very”—are useless in a research
paper.
Keep your emotions in check: the reader may not care for
your surprise, your pleasure or your sadness.
Use parentheses and footnotes sparingly.
Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
Good papers are easy to skim
Meaningful section headers (Avoid: “theory”, Prefer: “A
proof that test A is valid”)
Lists, bullet points, enumerations.
Simple—yet beautiful—figures.
Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
En dash, em dash
Avoid: “pp. 4-14.” Use: “pp. 4–14.” (en dash is longer than
hyphen)
Avoid: “For our experiments, we used the blue ribbon, found
under the table, to kill John.”
Prefer: “For our experiments, we used the blue ribbon—found
under the table—to kill John.” (em dash is a long hyphen)
Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
Acronyms
Avoid UA (useless acronyms)
DUAT: Do not use acronyms in titles.
DUAA: Do not use acronyms in abstracts.
Defined once the first time you encounter it (“The Nuclear
Terminator—henceforth NT—blew up.”)
Use sparingly.
Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
Be consistent
Don’t use github, GitHub and Github in the same document.
Don’t use “dataset” and “data set” in the same document.
Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
Be consistent (2)
Do: “Fig. 5 is below Fig. 6 and to the right of Fig. 4.”
Do: “Figure 5 is below Figure 6 and to the right of Figure 4.”
Avoid: “Fig. 5 is below fig6 and to the right of Figure 4.”
Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
Use spaces when appropriate
It is “Head Mounted Display (HMD)” not “Head Mounted
Display(HMD)”.
It is “apple, orange” not “apple,orange”.
Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
Learn about unbreakable spaces
Unbreakable space: “p. 4”
Unbreakable space: “We ate 4 pies.”
Unbreakable space: “The index was at location 55552.”
In LATEX, write “p. 4”. In Microsoft Word, it is
<ctrl><space>.
Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
Learn about significant digits
Do not: “1012.12 ms”.
Do: “1 s”.
Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
Report your error margin
If you report “1 s”, would it be “1 s” again if you reran the
experiment?
Always gather many numbers.
Then report your error margin (pick one: percentage,
standard variation, statistical test).
Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
Be precise
Avoid: “Method A is much better than method B.”
Do: “Method A is 60% faster than method B.”
Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
Be precise (2)
Avoid : “The speed of test A depends on X.”
Do: “Test A is faster when X is larger.”
Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
Be precise (3)
Avoid: “It was shown that test A is faster.”
Do: “We showed that test A was faster.”
Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
Keep It Simple
Employ uncomplicated terms.
Use simple words.
“digging device”→ shovel.
Use short sentences—no more than 15 words.
Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
Be assertive without lying
Avoid: “Algorithm A might be the best approach.”
Do: “Algorithm A is fastest in all our tests.”
Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
Prefer the present tense
Avoid: “We observed a trend in our data.”
Avoid: “We will observe a trend in our data.”
Do: “We observe a trend in our data.”
Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
Use strong verbs
Avoid: “We made use of categorization.”
Do: “We categorized.”
Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
Be impactful
Avoid: “IBM Cognos is a tool by IBM.”
Avoid: “We shall shortly present our motivation.”
Each of your sentence should reward us with insights.
Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
How to write mathematics
Variables are in italics: ax = b,
Nouns or named functions are not: sin2
x = Ftiming.
Be consistent. Use a table of notation if you must.
Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
Begin sentences in English
Avoid: “Ω is larger than one”
Do: “The parameter Ω is larger than one.”
Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
Overdoing mathematics makes you unreadable
Plain English is better!
Avoid: “We have i xi = 1.”
Do: “The sum of the parameters is one: i xi = 1.”
Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
Mathematics is part of the language
Avoid:
We have the following result.
F = ma
Is F = ma part of the sentence, or a sentence on its own?
Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
Mathematics is part of the language (2)
Do:
We have the following result:
F = ma.
The equation is part of the sentence!
Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
Figures
All figures must be numbered and captioned.
All figures must be referenced in the text.
Caption usually goes underneath. (Table captions often go
above.)
Code samples of more than 3 lines should appear in figures or
the equivalent, not in main text.
Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
Figures and bitmaps
Write good
papers
How?
No bitmap (JPEG, PNG, GIF).
Fonts must be large enough.
Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
Figures: use good tools
Learn about Vector Graphics:
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Vector_graphics.
Learn about TikZ: http://www.texample.net/tikz/.
Learn about Gnuplot: http://www.gnuplot.info/.
Learn about matplotlib: matplotlib.
Ask around!
Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
Figures with Excel
When using Excel:
Avoid the
defaults.
Get rid of
black border.
Get rid of the
silly key on
the right.
If you can’t use Excel properly, do not use it.
Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
Should you use color?
Absolutely! Most people read your papers in PDF.
But it must still be readable in black and white (use dark
colors).
Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
Should you use hyperlinks?
Absolutely!
But do you need to color your hyperlinks in blue? Probably
not.
Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
Thou shall not label needlessly
Equations are numbered only as needed. If you reference an
equation, number it. Avoid unused numbers.
Tables, figures, references must be referenced in the main
text
Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
What’s a good title
Must be precise.
Must be sexy and compelling.
No acronym.
Avoid : “On the problem of finding the derivative of sin x”
Prefer: “The derivative of sin x is cos x”
Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
What’s an abstract?
First sentence is key: avoid rambling.
Sexy: why must I read this paper absolutely?
The strong points must be there. (Sometimes, people won’t
read your paper.)
Self-contained: no reference, no hyperlink, no image.
Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
Kent Beck recipe for a good 4-sentence abstract
State the problem.
Why is it interesting?
What did you achieve?
What follows from your work?
Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
Introduction
Start with your motivation.
Put your work in a context. How is this paper different or
similar to other work?
Present the main definitions.
What question are you asking?
List your contributions and answers explicitly.
Not a long description of how the paper is organized.
Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
Theory
Present examples and motivation. Then present the
formalism.
Don’t include too many details (use appendices if you must).
Avoid unmotivated results.
Communicate difficult ideas with figures.
Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
Experiments and discussions
You need to confront your ideas with the real-world.
Even theory papers should have simulations, applications or
examples. Avoid pure abstract nonsensical theory.
Yet experiments are no substitute for theory.
Compare with the best results from your competitors.
Use examples to explain your results.
Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
Make your work reproducible
Describe fully your methodology and setup: be reproducible.
Given only your paper. . .
Someone should be able to reproduce all your numbers.
I am serious.
Avoid secret data. Avoid secret recipes. Avoid secret software.
Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
Good Experiments in Computer Science
Run software that’s fully described on fully described
hardware.
Use varied data, to show strength and weakness of your
approach.
Provide a complete analysis so we can understand your results.
Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
Write a good conclusion
Recall the strong point. Address future work.
Avoid introducing new difficult ideas this late.
Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
The “acknowledgements” section
Funding agencies!
Collaborators and reviewers.
Helpful discussions.
Be generous!
Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
References
Use software to ensure correct formatting (EndNote, BibTeX).
Google Scholar, IEEE, Springer, ACM, . . . can export the data
in correct format.
Be consistent throughout.
All references must be cited in the main text!
Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
How to cite?
Avoid: “[2] proved that X = B.”
Do: “John et al. [2] proved that X = B.”
Avoid: “In (Lemire, 2008), we proved that X = B”
Do: “We proved that X = B (Lemire, 2008).”
Do: “Lemire (2008) proved that X = B.”
Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
Who should you cite?
Papers you have used.
Papers you might have used.
Papers citing the papers you have used.
All of your competitors.
People like to be cited. Be generous!
Generous reference sections are also useful to readers (to
identify all related work).
Always cite at least one paper by Daniel Lemire.
Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
Self-plagiarism
Should you cite your own related work?
Absolutely! Otherwise, you are guilty of self-plagiarism.
Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
Why an appendix?
Short pieces of code.
Extra results.
Boring details.
If you have too much, write a technical report.
Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
The technical report
You have 20 pages, but they will only accept 5 pages?
It may take years for your paper to appear, but you need to
publish it now?
Write the paper, and post it online.
Perelman solved the Poincar´e conjecture with unreviewed
arXiv papers (http://www.arxiv.org).
Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
Why are these slides in English?
You should write in English (duh!):
The best journals and conferences are in English.
English journals and conferences are more widely read and
indexed.
Most papers are in English, and they mostly cite English
papers.
(Not all of your work needs to be in English.)
Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
Hint!
Try reading your paper out loud:
Are you boring?
Do you jump topic?
Are you confusing?
Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
Further reading
See my blog at http://lemire.me/blog/ under “write good
papers.”
Sylvia, How to Write a Lot: A Practical Guide to Productive
Academic Writing, 2007. ($15 at Amazon)
Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers

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Write good papers

  • 1. Write good papers Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Professor of Computer Science University of Quebec http://lemire.me/en/ blog: http://lemire.me/blog/ Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
  • 2. Publish or perish Yes, if you don’t publish, you perish. We think by writing. We think well by writing well. More papers ⇒ more visibility. Good papers build your reputation, over time. Bad papers harm your reputation. Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
  • 3. What should you write about? Must be a lasting reference (be ambitious!). Can you say something unexpected? Can you define new problems? Answer new questions? Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
  • 4. How to be productive? 1 Come up with hypothesis. 2 Research it. 3 Collect data. 4 Write paper. 5 Submit it quickly to a journal. 6 Become famous! 7 . . . Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
  • 5. How to be productive? 1 Come up with hypothesis. 2 Research it. 3 Collect data. 4 Write paper. 5 Submit it quickly to a journal. 6 Become famous! 7 NO! Not how it is done! Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
  • 6. How to be productive? (For real this time) Come up with general topic. Read everything about it. Write about what you learn. Ask new questions. Write them up. Seek answers in the literature. Ask your peers. Eventually, you will answer new questions: keep writing it up. Have different projects, at various stages: emergent, half done, almost done, in press. Start writing the papers before the research is completed. Take your time. Revise your writing continuously. Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
  • 7. How much time writing? Write all the time. Daily. No need to write 10 hours a day. Two hours a day is enough to be highly prolific. Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
  • 8. To write well Work over months or years! Write 1,000,000 words. Publish the best 1,000 words. Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
  • 9. Don’t be shy: use good tools If you must use MS Office: learn to use it properly. Use a spell checker. Just do it. (e.g., aspell) Learn LATEX and BibTeX if you do a lot of math. Use version control (subversion, git). Use grammar and style checkers: style-check.rb, lacheck. Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
  • 10. Things to avoid Do not use negations. Avoid the future tense (the word ”will” in English) to refer to something coming up next in the document. Avoid temporal words such as “now” or “next”. Avoid refering to other content with “below” or “above”. Most adverbs—such as ”very”—are useless in a research paper. Keep your emotions in check: the reader may not care for your surprise, your pleasure or your sadness. Use parentheses and footnotes sparingly. Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
  • 11. Good papers are easy to skim Meaningful section headers (Avoid: “theory”, Prefer: “A proof that test A is valid”) Lists, bullet points, enumerations. Simple—yet beautiful—figures. Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
  • 12. En dash, em dash Avoid: “pp. 4-14.” Use: “pp. 4–14.” (en dash is longer than hyphen) Avoid: “For our experiments, we used the blue ribbon, found under the table, to kill John.” Prefer: “For our experiments, we used the blue ribbon—found under the table—to kill John.” (em dash is a long hyphen) Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
  • 13. Acronyms Avoid UA (useless acronyms) DUAT: Do not use acronyms in titles. DUAA: Do not use acronyms in abstracts. Defined once the first time you encounter it (“The Nuclear Terminator—henceforth NT—blew up.”) Use sparingly. Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
  • 14. Be consistent Don’t use github, GitHub and Github in the same document. Don’t use “dataset” and “data set” in the same document. Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
  • 15. Be consistent (2) Do: “Fig. 5 is below Fig. 6 and to the right of Fig. 4.” Do: “Figure 5 is below Figure 6 and to the right of Figure 4.” Avoid: “Fig. 5 is below fig6 and to the right of Figure 4.” Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
  • 16. Use spaces when appropriate It is “Head Mounted Display (HMD)” not “Head Mounted Display(HMD)”. It is “apple, orange” not “apple,orange”. Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
  • 17. Learn about unbreakable spaces Unbreakable space: “p. 4” Unbreakable space: “We ate 4 pies.” Unbreakable space: “The index was at location 55552.” In LATEX, write “p. 4”. In Microsoft Word, it is <ctrl><space>. Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
  • 18. Learn about significant digits Do not: “1012.12 ms”. Do: “1 s”. Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
  • 19. Report your error margin If you report “1 s”, would it be “1 s” again if you reran the experiment? Always gather many numbers. Then report your error margin (pick one: percentage, standard variation, statistical test). Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
  • 20. Be precise Avoid: “Method A is much better than method B.” Do: “Method A is 60% faster than method B.” Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
  • 21. Be precise (2) Avoid : “The speed of test A depends on X.” Do: “Test A is faster when X is larger.” Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
  • 22. Be precise (3) Avoid: “It was shown that test A is faster.” Do: “We showed that test A was faster.” Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
  • 23. Keep It Simple Employ uncomplicated terms. Use simple words. “digging device”→ shovel. Use short sentences—no more than 15 words. Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
  • 24. Be assertive without lying Avoid: “Algorithm A might be the best approach.” Do: “Algorithm A is fastest in all our tests.” Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
  • 25. Prefer the present tense Avoid: “We observed a trend in our data.” Avoid: “We will observe a trend in our data.” Do: “We observe a trend in our data.” Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
  • 26. Use strong verbs Avoid: “We made use of categorization.” Do: “We categorized.” Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
  • 27. Be impactful Avoid: “IBM Cognos is a tool by IBM.” Avoid: “We shall shortly present our motivation.” Each of your sentence should reward us with insights. Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
  • 28. How to write mathematics Variables are in italics: ax = b, Nouns or named functions are not: sin2 x = Ftiming. Be consistent. Use a table of notation if you must. Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
  • 29. Begin sentences in English Avoid: “Ω is larger than one” Do: “The parameter Ω is larger than one.” Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
  • 30. Overdoing mathematics makes you unreadable Plain English is better! Avoid: “We have i xi = 1.” Do: “The sum of the parameters is one: i xi = 1.” Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
  • 31. Mathematics is part of the language Avoid: We have the following result. F = ma Is F = ma part of the sentence, or a sentence on its own? Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
  • 32. Mathematics is part of the language (2) Do: We have the following result: F = ma. The equation is part of the sentence! Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
  • 33. Figures All figures must be numbered and captioned. All figures must be referenced in the text. Caption usually goes underneath. (Table captions often go above.) Code samples of more than 3 lines should appear in figures or the equivalent, not in main text. Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
  • 34. Figures and bitmaps Write good papers How? No bitmap (JPEG, PNG, GIF). Fonts must be large enough. Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
  • 35. Figures: use good tools Learn about Vector Graphics: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Vector_graphics. Learn about TikZ: http://www.texample.net/tikz/. Learn about Gnuplot: http://www.gnuplot.info/. Learn about matplotlib: matplotlib. Ask around! Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
  • 36. Figures with Excel When using Excel: Avoid the defaults. Get rid of black border. Get rid of the silly key on the right. If you can’t use Excel properly, do not use it. Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
  • 37. Should you use color? Absolutely! Most people read your papers in PDF. But it must still be readable in black and white (use dark colors). Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
  • 38. Should you use hyperlinks? Absolutely! But do you need to color your hyperlinks in blue? Probably not. Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
  • 39. Thou shall not label needlessly Equations are numbered only as needed. If you reference an equation, number it. Avoid unused numbers. Tables, figures, references must be referenced in the main text Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
  • 40. What’s a good title Must be precise. Must be sexy and compelling. No acronym. Avoid : “On the problem of finding the derivative of sin x” Prefer: “The derivative of sin x is cos x” Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
  • 41. What’s an abstract? First sentence is key: avoid rambling. Sexy: why must I read this paper absolutely? The strong points must be there. (Sometimes, people won’t read your paper.) Self-contained: no reference, no hyperlink, no image. Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
  • 42. Kent Beck recipe for a good 4-sentence abstract State the problem. Why is it interesting? What did you achieve? What follows from your work? Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
  • 43. Introduction Start with your motivation. Put your work in a context. How is this paper different or similar to other work? Present the main definitions. What question are you asking? List your contributions and answers explicitly. Not a long description of how the paper is organized. Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
  • 44. Theory Present examples and motivation. Then present the formalism. Don’t include too many details (use appendices if you must). Avoid unmotivated results. Communicate difficult ideas with figures. Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
  • 45. Experiments and discussions You need to confront your ideas with the real-world. Even theory papers should have simulations, applications or examples. Avoid pure abstract nonsensical theory. Yet experiments are no substitute for theory. Compare with the best results from your competitors. Use examples to explain your results. Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
  • 46. Make your work reproducible Describe fully your methodology and setup: be reproducible. Given only your paper. . . Someone should be able to reproduce all your numbers. I am serious. Avoid secret data. Avoid secret recipes. Avoid secret software. Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
  • 47. Good Experiments in Computer Science Run software that’s fully described on fully described hardware. Use varied data, to show strength and weakness of your approach. Provide a complete analysis so we can understand your results. Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
  • 48. Write a good conclusion Recall the strong point. Address future work. Avoid introducing new difficult ideas this late. Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
  • 49. The “acknowledgements” section Funding agencies! Collaborators and reviewers. Helpful discussions. Be generous! Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
  • 50. References Use software to ensure correct formatting (EndNote, BibTeX). Google Scholar, IEEE, Springer, ACM, . . . can export the data in correct format. Be consistent throughout. All references must be cited in the main text! Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
  • 51. How to cite? Avoid: “[2] proved that X = B.” Do: “John et al. [2] proved that X = B.” Avoid: “In (Lemire, 2008), we proved that X = B” Do: “We proved that X = B (Lemire, 2008).” Do: “Lemire (2008) proved that X = B.” Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
  • 52. Who should you cite? Papers you have used. Papers you might have used. Papers citing the papers you have used. All of your competitors. People like to be cited. Be generous! Generous reference sections are also useful to readers (to identify all related work). Always cite at least one paper by Daniel Lemire. Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
  • 53. Self-plagiarism Should you cite your own related work? Absolutely! Otherwise, you are guilty of self-plagiarism. Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
  • 54. Why an appendix? Short pieces of code. Extra results. Boring details. If you have too much, write a technical report. Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
  • 55. The technical report You have 20 pages, but they will only accept 5 pages? It may take years for your paper to appear, but you need to publish it now? Write the paper, and post it online. Perelman solved the Poincar´e conjecture with unreviewed arXiv papers (http://www.arxiv.org). Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
  • 56. Why are these slides in English? You should write in English (duh!): The best journals and conferences are in English. English journals and conferences are more widely read and indexed. Most papers are in English, and they mostly cite English papers. (Not all of your work needs to be in English.) Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
  • 57. Hint! Try reading your paper out loud: Are you boring? Do you jump topic? Are you confusing? Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers
  • 58. Further reading See my blog at http://lemire.me/blog/ under “write good papers.” Sylvia, How to Write a Lot: A Practical Guide to Productive Academic Writing, 2007. ($15 at Amazon) Daniel Lemire, Ph.D. Write good papers