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8P20 
2014-15 
Week 5: 
Writing 4
Professional Learning Conversation 
• The Third Teacher 
• Follow-up: 
– Gradual Release of Responsibility 
– Show Me app
How did you learn to drive?
Gradual Release of Responsibility 
Modelled Shared Guided Independent 
READING and WRITING 
Teaching 
Teaching 
Teaching Teaching 
Learning 
Learning & 
Learning Practising Practising 
& & & 
Learning Practising Performing Performing 
4
5 
Comprehensive Literacy 
The Gradual Release of Responsibility 
Modelled Shared Guided Independent 
Teacher does 
Students watch 
Teacher does 
Students help 
Students do 
Teacher 
helps 
Students do 
alone 
Teacher assists 
as needed 
like an apprenticeship program
Classroom Photos 
• As you view the following set of photos 
consider: 
1. How does Mrs. Meussen’s classroom layout 
reflect the features recommended in your 
reading? Refer to the last page of your 
reading “In Brief…” 
2. How does it support the Gradual Release of 
Responsibility model?
Week 5   ruth - 2014-15
Week 5   ruth - 2014-15
Week 5   ruth - 2014-15
Week 5   ruth - 2014-15
Week 5   ruth - 2014-15
Week 5   ruth - 2014-15
Week 5   ruth - 2014-15
Week 5   ruth - 2014-15
Week 5   ruth - 2014-15
Week 5   ruth - 2014-15
Writing Assessment cont’d 
• Assessment for, as, and of learning 
• Writing assessment resources 
– Guide to Effective Instruction 
• Assessment 
• Writing
The more things change….. 
If this were a Bitstrip cartoon, what could the panel labelled 2014 include?
Classroom 
Assessment 
Large Scale 
Assessment 
EQAO 
For 
Diagnostic 
Formative 
As Formative 
Of Summative
Growing Success Policies 
• Seven Fundamental Principles 
• Learning Skills & Work Habits 
• Performance Standards- The Achievement Chart 
• Assessment for Learning and as Learning 
• Evaluation 
• Reporting Student Achievement 
• Students with Special Education Needs 
• English Language Learners 
• E-Learning 
• Credit Recovery 
http://www.edugains.ca/newsite/aer2/
The Writing Process 
Stages of the Writing Process: 
– Prewrite 
– Draft 
– Revise 
– Edit 
– Publish 
– This is a recursive process. Most writers move 
back and forth among the stages
Writing 
• 1. Generate, gather, and 
organize ideas and 
information to write for an 
intended purpose and 
audience 
• 3. Use editing, proofreading, 
and publishing skills and 
strategies, and knowledge of 
language conventions, to 
correct errors, refine 
expression, and present their 
work effectively 
• 2. Draft and revise their 
writing, using a variety of 
informational, literary, and 
graphic forms and stylistic 
elements appropriate for the 
purpose and audience 
• 4. Reflect on and identify 
their strengths as writers, 
areas for improvement, and 
the strategies they found 
most helpful at different 
stages in the writing process
Gradual Release of Responsibility 
Modelled Shared Guided Independent 
READING and WRITING 
Teaching 
Teaching 
Teaching Teaching 
Learning 
Learning & 
Learning Practising Practising 
& & & 
Learning Practising Performing Performing 
23
Procedural Writing 
Find a procedure described in these 
resources: 
• Infographic (try Pinterest) 
• Video 
• Blog entry (try 
http://goo.gl/a4Vxup ) 
• Ikea assembly guide (see 
Sakai/Lesson 5/Writing 4 
Resources/ Ikea assembly guide) 
• Lesson plan (try 
http://readwritethink.org ) 
• Recipe 
Discuss at your table: 
• Which features of these 
procedural texts are most 
helpful to you? 
• Which formats are not at all 
helpful?
Procedural Writing 
How to… 
• Tune a guitar 
• Spin a basketball 
• Post your PLC response to Sakai 
• Treat a pulled muscle 
• Make paper airplanes 
• Edit and post a photo to Instagram 
• Get a parking spot at the Hamilton 
campus 
• Catch a bus to Brock in time for 
8:00 a.m. class 
• Use a Keurig coffee maker 
• Write a cheque (It’s true – many 
do not know this!) 
• Your choice:
Apps for Procedural Work and 
Description 
Explain Everything Show Me

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Week 5 ruth - 2014-15

  • 1. 8P20 2014-15 Week 5: Writing 4
  • 2. Professional Learning Conversation • The Third Teacher • Follow-up: – Gradual Release of Responsibility – Show Me app
  • 3. How did you learn to drive?
  • 4. Gradual Release of Responsibility Modelled Shared Guided Independent READING and WRITING Teaching Teaching Teaching Teaching Learning Learning & Learning Practising Practising & & & Learning Practising Performing Performing 4
  • 5. 5 Comprehensive Literacy The Gradual Release of Responsibility Modelled Shared Guided Independent Teacher does Students watch Teacher does Students help Students do Teacher helps Students do alone Teacher assists as needed like an apprenticeship program
  • 6. Classroom Photos • As you view the following set of photos consider: 1. How does Mrs. Meussen’s classroom layout reflect the features recommended in your reading? Refer to the last page of your reading “In Brief…” 2. How does it support the Gradual Release of Responsibility model?
  • 17. Writing Assessment cont’d • Assessment for, as, and of learning • Writing assessment resources – Guide to Effective Instruction • Assessment • Writing
  • 18. The more things change….. If this were a Bitstrip cartoon, what could the panel labelled 2014 include?
  • 19. Classroom Assessment Large Scale Assessment EQAO For Diagnostic Formative As Formative Of Summative
  • 20. Growing Success Policies • Seven Fundamental Principles • Learning Skills & Work Habits • Performance Standards- The Achievement Chart • Assessment for Learning and as Learning • Evaluation • Reporting Student Achievement • Students with Special Education Needs • English Language Learners • E-Learning • Credit Recovery http://www.edugains.ca/newsite/aer2/
  • 21. The Writing Process Stages of the Writing Process: – Prewrite – Draft – Revise – Edit – Publish – This is a recursive process. Most writers move back and forth among the stages
  • 22. Writing • 1. Generate, gather, and organize ideas and information to write for an intended purpose and audience • 3. Use editing, proofreading, and publishing skills and strategies, and knowledge of language conventions, to correct errors, refine expression, and present their work effectively • 2. Draft and revise their writing, using a variety of informational, literary, and graphic forms and stylistic elements appropriate for the purpose and audience • 4. Reflect on and identify their strengths as writers, areas for improvement, and the strategies they found most helpful at different stages in the writing process
  • 23. Gradual Release of Responsibility Modelled Shared Guided Independent READING and WRITING Teaching Teaching Teaching Teaching Learning Learning & Learning Practising Practising & & & Learning Practising Performing Performing 23
  • 24. Procedural Writing Find a procedure described in these resources: • Infographic (try Pinterest) • Video • Blog entry (try http://goo.gl/a4Vxup ) • Ikea assembly guide (see Sakai/Lesson 5/Writing 4 Resources/ Ikea assembly guide) • Lesson plan (try http://readwritethink.org ) • Recipe Discuss at your table: • Which features of these procedural texts are most helpful to you? • Which formats are not at all helpful?
  • 25. Procedural Writing How to… • Tune a guitar • Spin a basketball • Post your PLC response to Sakai • Treat a pulled muscle • Make paper airplanes • Edit and post a photo to Instagram • Get a parking spot at the Hamilton campus • Catch a bus to Brock in time for 8:00 a.m. class • Use a Keurig coffee maker • Write a cheque (It’s true – many do not know this!) • Your choice:
  • 26. Apps for Procedural Work and Description Explain Everything Show Me

Editor's Notes

  • #20: Spotlight On: Writing Assessment Strategy: Writing Task i.e.;.; EQAO Grade 6 Language Booklet Spring 2013: share sample writing tasks http://www.eqao.com/pdf_e/13/6e_Lang2_0813.pdf and scoring guides http://www.eqao.com/pdf_e/13/6e_Lang2_Wtg_SG_R0813.pdf i.e.; OWA: share sample writing tasks i.e.; Pearson or Nelson resources: share sample writing task What would you use this writing task for: fill in the chart EQAO sample: Large Scale Assessment: of – summative assessment - OWA sample: Classroom Assessment: could be in all categories of the chart depending on how the teacher will use the data Publisher sample: Classroom Assessment: could be in all categories of the chart depending on how the teacher will use the data Have students use a Guide to Effective Literacy Instruction Volume 2 Assessment to locate 5 Assessment strategies for Writing. Record the title and a short description. Categorize them in the chart - each table group has a chart to complete?? Google docs? Students will have a variety of writing assessment strategies to use in placement
  • #21: Ministry Growing Success policies as of 2010 – revised document to be released next year with additional policy for Kindergarten. Mandated policies for all teachers in Ontario. We will focus on 2 policies: Assessment for Learning and as Learning and Evaluation, to examine Writing Assessment Share AER Gains site on eduGains page – where resources and information can be found about Growing Success