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Write Responsively:
Content as a Touchpoint
Heidi Steiner Burkhardt
User Experience Specialist
University of Michigan Library
@heidi_sb
Designing for Digital
April 7, 2016
About Me
Content in User Experience
What this talk is not
Mission
Identify the types of web
content your library sends
out into the world
Practice empathy for users
emotional states
Initiate the development of
voice and tone guidelines
Mission
Identify the types of web
content your library sends
out into the world
Practice empathy for users
emotional states
Initiate the development of
voice and tone guidelines
Employ a cohesive strategy
Write appropriate web
content
Establish a unified
personality for your library
on the web
Big Picture
Touchpoints
“Any point of contact between a buyer and a seller.”
-Oxford Dictionary
Chart via Google results for: touchpoint
Touchpoints
“Any point of contact between a buyer and a seller.”
-Oxford Dictionary
Chart via Google results for: touchpoint
“A touchpoint is a point of interaction involving a specific
human need in a specific time and place.”
-Chris Risdon on Un-Sucking the Touchpoint
http://adaptivepath.org/ideas/un-sucking-the-touchpoint/
User Journeys
Find out if the library has a book you want, go get it, and check it out
Book
Available
Search Results
Hours,
location,
directions
Go to
library
Book
checked
out
Book not
owned
Place hold
Get
notification
Request
through
ILL, etc.
Check out
at desk
Find in the
stacks
Place an interlibrary loan request for an article that is not available
in full-text
Article is
abstract
only
Search
Results
Link
resolver
page
Access ILL
system
Fill out
form
Get
notification
Access ILL
system
Open,
download
article
Arrive at
event
Learn about and attend an event
Social
media
Blog
Email
newsletter
Flyer
Details,
location,
directions
Go to
library
Website
Copy and content
Policies and general information
About us page ⦿ Hours ⦿ Borrowing ⦿ Events
Policies (but not too many)
Support
Help pages ⦿ FAQs
Self-help knowledge base
entries ⦿ How-to guides
Instructional content
Personal support
from humans (!)
Interface language and microcopy
System alerts ⦿ Status messages ⦿ Button text
Form labels ⦿ Email and text notifications
Email ⦿ Chat ⦿ Text
Editorial
Marketing and outreach
Email newsletters ⦿ Twitter ⦿ Facebook
Other social media
Blog posts
Physical
Wayfinding ⦿ Stacks labeling
Signage and flyers of all flavors
Homework
All the feels and writing
responsively
Plutchik's
Wheel of
Emotions
What time does the library close?1
Potential emotions:
Interest, anticipation, trust
When you write, be:
Clear, concise
Why: Need information or answers
Policies and
general
information
What time does the library close?1
Make the current day’s hours
obvious.
Present complex hours clearly.
Indiana University and UNC
Chapel Hill are great examples.
Why: Need information or answers
Policies and
general
information
What time does the library close?1
Similar tasks:
● Find the events calendar
● Learn how to make donations
● Figure out how to access
resources
Why: Need information or answers
Policies and
general
information
Place a hold on a book (successfully)1
Potential emotions:
Joy, anticipation, optimism
When you write, be:
Affirmative, friendly
Why: Trying to accomplish something
Interface
language and
microcopy
Place a hold on a book (successfully)1
Success! We got your
request and will let you
know when it’s ready.
Why: Trying to accomplish something
Interface
language and
microcopy
Place a hold on a book (unsuccessfully)1
Potential emotions:
Annoyance, anger, confusion
When you write, be:
Gentle, calm, kind, clear, helpful
Why: Trying to accomplish something
Interface
language and
microcopy
Place a hold on a book (unsuccessfully)1
Why: Trying to accomplish something
Interface
language and
microcopy
Uh oh. Something went
wrong. Use the Ask Us
link for help.
Place a hold on a book1
Similar tasks:
● Check your account and renew
items
● Download an ebook
● Place an interlibrary loan request
Why: Trying to accomplish something
Interface
language and
microcopy
Requesting an article not available in full-
text2
Potential emotions:
Apprehension, interest, confusion
When you write, be:
Straightforward, useful,
encouraging
Why: Trying to accomplish something
Support
Requesting an article not available in full-
text2
Why: Trying to accomplish something
Support
Explain without overwhelming or
insulting the user’s intelligence.
Walk through steps and don’t
assume knowledge.
Be specific.
Requesting an article not available in full-
text2
Why: Trying to accomplish something
Support
Similar tasks:
● Download an ebook
● Use databases remotely
● Find peer-reviewed articles
● Use citation export tools
Interlibrary loan request is ready.2
Why: Expecting communication
Interface
language and
microcopy
Potential emotions:
Joy, anticipation, optimism
When you write, be:
Positive, friendly, clear
Interlibrary loan request is ready.2
Why: Expecting communication
Interface
language and
microcopy
Good news! Your
interlibrary loan request is
ready. Sign in to access
and download it.
Interlibrary loan request is ready.2
Why: Expecting communication
Interface
language and
microcopy
Similar content:
● Hold is ready
Similar, but opposite:
● Couldn’t fill request
Learned about an event in the email
newsletter3
Potential emotions:
Interest, distraction, curiosity
When you write, be:
Enthusiastic, engaging, personal
Why: Sphere of life
Outreach and
marketing
Learned about an event in the newsletter3
Be casual and talk to your readers
like friends.
Keep it useful and interesting.
Prioritize your content.
Use specific subject lines.
Why: Sphere of life
Outreach and
marketing
Learned about an event in the newsletter3
Similar scenarios:
● Follower on social media
● Friend shared or retweeted
● Word of mouth
Why: Sphere of life
Outreach and
marketing
Learned about an event from the library’s
blog3
Potential emotions:
Interest, anticipation, trust
When you write, be:
Casual, friendly, genuine
Why: Active library user
Editorial
Learned about an event from the library’s
blog3
Write clear titles.
Use writing for the web best
practices for readability.
Develop topics and keep a
calendar, don’t write just to write.
Why: Active library user
Editorial
Voice and Tone
Voice
Tone
If your library
were a person,
how would you
describe them?
How do you
want people to
feel when they
visit your library
on the web?
Consider times
a shift in tone
may be needed.
Reality (and encouragement, too)
Jump on opportunities. Chip away.
Piece by piece. Project by project.
Keep the big picture in sight.
Be a content advocate.
Make others aware of these touchpoints.
Favorite reads..
How to Make Sense of Any Mess by Abby Covert
Nicely Said by Nicole Fenton and Kate Kiefer Lee
Everybody Writes by Ann Handley
Useful, Usable, Desirable by Aaron Schmidt and
Amanda Etches
Gather Content blog
https://gathercontent.com/blog/
Voice & Tone
http://voiceandtone.com
All images either owned by me or in the public
domain. Thanks Pixabay!
Write Responsively: Content as a Touchpoint
Thanks so much.
Heidi Steiner Burkhardt
heidisb@umich.edu
@heidi_sb

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Write Responsively: Content as a Touchpoint

  • 1. Write Responsively: Content as a Touchpoint Heidi Steiner Burkhardt User Experience Specialist University of Michigan Library @heidi_sb Designing for Digital April 7, 2016
  • 3. Content in User Experience
  • 4. What this talk is not
  • 5. Mission Identify the types of web content your library sends out into the world Practice empathy for users emotional states Initiate the development of voice and tone guidelines
  • 6. Mission Identify the types of web content your library sends out into the world Practice empathy for users emotional states Initiate the development of voice and tone guidelines Employ a cohesive strategy Write appropriate web content Establish a unified personality for your library on the web Big Picture
  • 7. Touchpoints “Any point of contact between a buyer and a seller.” -Oxford Dictionary Chart via Google results for: touchpoint
  • 8. Touchpoints “Any point of contact between a buyer and a seller.” -Oxford Dictionary Chart via Google results for: touchpoint “A touchpoint is a point of interaction involving a specific human need in a specific time and place.” -Chris Risdon on Un-Sucking the Touchpoint http://adaptivepath.org/ideas/un-sucking-the-touchpoint/
  • 10. Find out if the library has a book you want, go get it, and check it out Book Available Search Results Hours, location, directions Go to library Book checked out Book not owned Place hold Get notification Request through ILL, etc. Check out at desk Find in the stacks
  • 11. Place an interlibrary loan request for an article that is not available in full-text Article is abstract only Search Results Link resolver page Access ILL system Fill out form Get notification Access ILL system Open, download article
  • 12. Arrive at event Learn about and attend an event Social media Blog Email newsletter Flyer Details, location, directions Go to library Website
  • 14. Policies and general information About us page ⦿ Hours ⦿ Borrowing ⦿ Events Policies (but not too many) Support Help pages ⦿ FAQs Self-help knowledge base entries ⦿ How-to guides Instructional content
  • 15. Personal support from humans (!) Interface language and microcopy System alerts ⦿ Status messages ⦿ Button text Form labels ⦿ Email and text notifications Email ⦿ Chat ⦿ Text
  • 16. Editorial Marketing and outreach Email newsletters ⦿ Twitter ⦿ Facebook Other social media Blog posts Physical Wayfinding ⦿ Stacks labeling Signage and flyers of all flavors
  • 18. All the feels and writing responsively
  • 20. What time does the library close?1 Potential emotions: Interest, anticipation, trust When you write, be: Clear, concise Why: Need information or answers Policies and general information
  • 21. What time does the library close?1 Make the current day’s hours obvious. Present complex hours clearly. Indiana University and UNC Chapel Hill are great examples. Why: Need information or answers Policies and general information
  • 22. What time does the library close?1 Similar tasks: ● Find the events calendar ● Learn how to make donations ● Figure out how to access resources Why: Need information or answers Policies and general information
  • 23. Place a hold on a book (successfully)1 Potential emotions: Joy, anticipation, optimism When you write, be: Affirmative, friendly Why: Trying to accomplish something Interface language and microcopy
  • 24. Place a hold on a book (successfully)1 Success! We got your request and will let you know when it’s ready. Why: Trying to accomplish something Interface language and microcopy
  • 25. Place a hold on a book (unsuccessfully)1 Potential emotions: Annoyance, anger, confusion When you write, be: Gentle, calm, kind, clear, helpful Why: Trying to accomplish something Interface language and microcopy
  • 26. Place a hold on a book (unsuccessfully)1 Why: Trying to accomplish something Interface language and microcopy Uh oh. Something went wrong. Use the Ask Us link for help.
  • 27. Place a hold on a book1 Similar tasks: ● Check your account and renew items ● Download an ebook ● Place an interlibrary loan request Why: Trying to accomplish something Interface language and microcopy
  • 28. Requesting an article not available in full- text2 Potential emotions: Apprehension, interest, confusion When you write, be: Straightforward, useful, encouraging Why: Trying to accomplish something Support
  • 29. Requesting an article not available in full- text2 Why: Trying to accomplish something Support Explain without overwhelming or insulting the user’s intelligence. Walk through steps and don’t assume knowledge. Be specific.
  • 30. Requesting an article not available in full- text2 Why: Trying to accomplish something Support Similar tasks: ● Download an ebook ● Use databases remotely ● Find peer-reviewed articles ● Use citation export tools
  • 31. Interlibrary loan request is ready.2 Why: Expecting communication Interface language and microcopy Potential emotions: Joy, anticipation, optimism When you write, be: Positive, friendly, clear
  • 32. Interlibrary loan request is ready.2 Why: Expecting communication Interface language and microcopy Good news! Your interlibrary loan request is ready. Sign in to access and download it.
  • 33. Interlibrary loan request is ready.2 Why: Expecting communication Interface language and microcopy Similar content: ● Hold is ready Similar, but opposite: ● Couldn’t fill request
  • 34. Learned about an event in the email newsletter3 Potential emotions: Interest, distraction, curiosity When you write, be: Enthusiastic, engaging, personal Why: Sphere of life Outreach and marketing
  • 35. Learned about an event in the newsletter3 Be casual and talk to your readers like friends. Keep it useful and interesting. Prioritize your content. Use specific subject lines. Why: Sphere of life Outreach and marketing
  • 36. Learned about an event in the newsletter3 Similar scenarios: ● Follower on social media ● Friend shared or retweeted ● Word of mouth Why: Sphere of life Outreach and marketing
  • 37. Learned about an event from the library’s blog3 Potential emotions: Interest, anticipation, trust When you write, be: Casual, friendly, genuine Why: Active library user Editorial
  • 38. Learned about an event from the library’s blog3 Write clear titles. Use writing for the web best practices for readability. Develop topics and keep a calendar, don’t write just to write. Why: Active library user Editorial
  • 40. Voice
  • 41. Tone
  • 42. If your library were a person, how would you describe them?
  • 43. How do you want people to feel when they visit your library on the web?
  • 44. Consider times a shift in tone may be needed.
  • 46. Jump on opportunities. Chip away. Piece by piece. Project by project. Keep the big picture in sight.
  • 47. Be a content advocate. Make others aware of these touchpoints.
  • 48. Favorite reads.. How to Make Sense of Any Mess by Abby Covert Nicely Said by Nicole Fenton and Kate Kiefer Lee Everybody Writes by Ann Handley Useful, Usable, Desirable by Aaron Schmidt and Amanda Etches Gather Content blog https://gathercontent.com/blog/ Voice & Tone http://voiceandtone.com All images either owned by me or in the public domain. Thanks Pixabay!
  • 50. Thanks so much. Heidi Steiner Burkhardt heidisb@umich.edu @heidi_sb